Obesity Case

The topic I have selected is obesity. The audience for my paper is people who is obesity or who has children that is obesity. I chose to write about this topic because I want people to understand that obesity can be a dangerous health issue. As I ride around in my city I see obesity everywhere from children to grownups. Some are healthy but most are not, and what I mean by that is most people who are obesity deal with high blood pressure, diabetes, and heart problems. And they love fast food places which are causing the health issues to arise. I know obesity is hard to deal with because I was big myself but I decide to make some changes and lose weight. And get my health back under control because I have a child and I want to be in his life for a long time. Most people who are overweight don’t consider these things. Losing weight is hard but the best part is the outcome and results you receive once you have over came this outlook and people see you different than they did before. I’m not looking for anyone approve about being small because small people have health issues to. I’m looking to help obesity people understand the health issues and what they can do to fix it. I will expand my topic with outside sources and experiences. My research proposal and outline will let readers know what my topic about and how I plan to expand my position paper. I will provide a road map of my ideas for my research paper, including my thesis, organization, and my major ideas. The places that would be good to look at for my research paper would be mayoclinic (com), American heart association, and win.niddk (com). There are a few other sites as well but these will be the main three I use because they have the proper information I need. The criteria I will use to evaluate the credibility of my sources would be to check the header or footer, the about us or similar link, and/or home page to find out if the site is liable to use. I hope to learn that I may have changed people

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